Monday, October 28, 2019

Review Article:The Rhyming Rainbow




Pravat Kumar Padhy. The Rhyming Rainbow: A Tanka Collection. New Delhi: Authorspress, 2019. Pp.58. Rs. 295/-. ISBN: 978-93-89110-09-8
Reviewed by Abnish Singh Chauhan
Creation and Criticism, Issue 14-15, 2019
Contemporary Indian poet Pravat Kumar Padhy, who witnesses “the colours of hope and a world of joy of living in the temple of poetry” (15) in the preface of his tanka collection The Rhyming Rainbow, efficiently writes poems of poetic science, music, memories, animals, birds, butterflies, flowers, trees, gardens, fields, forest, deserts, hills, valleys, rivers, ocean, sea, sky, stars, moon, sun, fire, rain, water, wind, winter, summer, autumn, spring, agony, tears, ignorance, darkness, beauty, love, light and happiness that always give him poetic insight, delight and encouragement. It seems as if he regularly sits under the Boddhi tree where he contemplates and composes his colourful poems on the grave issues of life and meditates on how to turn within to discover “reflection of sound and light” (34).
The poems of The Rhyming Rainbow are not about some imaginary world. They are the poems from the real world that emanates natural-beauty, natural-wonders and natural-colours of life— “Gentle wind muses/ songs of springs to the far off fields/ angel of beauty/ visits the land of rainbow/ birds clap flapping their wings” (19). This music of wind with clapping sound portrays the paintings of smile, love and laughter. The gentle touch of the breeze and colourful landscapes drain “all agonies” (21) of the suffering mankind and fill its life with fragrance and friendship. The poet again delivers emotions, thoughts and imagination springing from his beautiful heart that live and sustain them in his own lucid manner: “Her smile/ blossoms in the garden of life/ the moist breeze/ swings on the wings of butterflies/ unveiling the early morning dream” (28).
The collection offers an account of his long journey “through twilight shade” to simultaneously experience darkness and light of his “inner thought” (44). These experiences become a great gift to him in visualizing the imprints of “tiny footings” made in the life-journey of so many active and hard-working people of the society, which “remain as the image of joy” (44) in the memory of the soft-hearted and strong-willed poet. But, this is not an easy task as it requires a lot of effort at physical and intellectual levels to understand, love and appreciate others: “A flow of music/ in the rhythm of rain/ the flute/ recounts its memories/ under the bamboo tree” (28).

The rainbow of memories does not allow the poet to take rest as it continuously reflects in his mind. Subsequently, the poet finds anomalies around him, observes unpleasant things and hears fuming voice in today’s communication— “I adjust to live” (20), “I listen to my loneliness” (27), “The wrath of fire/ burns everything”, “He talks/ with angry voice” (29) and “Argument after argument” (54). Such experiences do not let him down as he is always ready to “burn the garbage/ as snow covers the night” (54). He silently keeps his faith, gently broods over the problems and nicely composes kindhearted messages for the masses of modern society— “the words/ I rearrange to compose/ a kindhearted poem” (29). This is just a process to get started, to take the steps, to unite the threads, to weave the thoughts, to alleviate the pain and to forgive and forget the things in the life-journey: “Sprinkles of memories/ essay the rainbow of union/ the tender lips/ urge the swollen eyes/ earnestly for your forgiving” (29).

The multihued poems of this book are marked by Padhy’s longings for optimistic perspective, healthy development and humanistic approach— “Tomorrow man may/ fly to Mars and beyond/ I wish all to settle/ and flourish as human alone-/ no caste, no religion” (52). His poems are tender like flowers, vibrant like sparrows, warm like sunrays, animated like waves, firm like stones and resilient like Nataraja. They are deep, effective, progressive and sublime in contents: “Early dawn/ with tender sunrays/I wish/ light to reach the huts/ of the slum-dwellers” (30). Consequently, the rainbow of love, compassion, wish and hope, as created in these poems, are signatures of his art and his creativity and erudition can be enjoyed through his socio-cultural, natural and rational journeys in the world of poetry.

The Reviewer:
Dr Abnish Singh Chauhan (1979), the editor of two online journals– Creation and Criticism and IJHER and a Hindi magazine– Poorvabhas, is presently serving as a Professor and Principal, BIU College of Humanities & Journalism, Bareilly International University, Bareilly. He has authored a number of books including Swami Vivekananda: Select Speeches, Speeches of Swami Vivekananda and Subhash Chandra Bose: A Comparative Study, The Fictional World of Arun Joshi: Paradigm Shift in Values and Tukda Kagaz Ka (A collection of Hindi Lyrics). He can be contacted at abnishsinghchauhan@gmail.com.



sun, sea, sand and the footprints

Modern Haiku, 50.3 Autumn 2019 (Ed. Paul Miller)



Friday, October 18, 2019

Wednesday, October 16, 2019


the breeze
whispers something
in midnight silence
the crescent moon paints
shades of my stretched solitude
*
die Brise
flüstert etwas
in die Mitternachtsstille
der Sichelmond malt
Schatten meiner sich dehnenden Einsamkeit
Chrysanthemum 26, Fall Issue 2019 (Ed. Beate Conrad)

Friday, October 4, 2019

Butterfly Dream: Desert Journey Haiku by Pravat Kumar Padhy

English Original

desert journey --
camels follow shadow
after shadow

Highly Commendation, 2015 Creatrix Haiku Prize

Pravat Kumar Padhy


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

沙漠之旅 --
一列駱駝跟隨一個影子
又一個影子

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

沙漠之旅 --
一列骆驼跟随一个影子
又一个影子


Bio Sketch

Pravat Kumar Padhy hails from Odisha, India. He holds Masters in Science and Technology and a Ph.D from IIT- Dhanbad. His literary work cited in Spectrum History of Indian Literature in EnglishAlienation in Contemporary Indian English PoetryCultural and Philosophical Reflections in Indian Poetry in English, etc. His Japanese short forms of poetry appeared in various international journals and anthologies. His tanka, ‘I mingle’ is featured in the “Kudo Resource Guide”, Cal Performances, University of California, Berkeley, 2014/2015 Season.His haiku won Vancouver Cherry Blossom Festival Honourable Mention Award, Canada, UNESCO International Year of Water Co-operation, The Kloštar Ivanić International Haiku Contest, Creatrix Haiku Commendation Award, IAFOR Vladimir Devide Haiku Award and 7th Setouchi Matsuyama International Photo Haiku Award. 

2 comments:

  1. L1 sets the theme/scene while the use of repetition in Ls 2&3 visually and emotionally strengthens the thematic focus of L1.

    Pravat's desert journey haiku is highly cinematic and reads well as a poetic rendering of the establishing shot of a Hollywood desert movie.