sand
writings
along a
solitary shore
from the
horizon
roaring
waves wash away
her
lengthy inner script
And yet another excellent
tanka by Pravat starting with a catchy first line "sand
writings", which takes us immediately to a beach shoreline. The final line
is also poignant as we have to imagine an entire life's story disappear
before our very eyes. A strong depiction of the importance
of that life.
-an’ya: Editor, Tanka Origins, 2nd Edition, December
2019
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