a lone seagull
on a shore branch
how long it waits
as waves touch and go
as waves touch and go
Tanka Origins, August Edition 2020 (Ed. an’ya)
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Editor’s comment: A very memorable tanka by
Pravat Kumar Padhy from India. Suddenly, I am a seagull alone waiting,
waiting, waiting on a shore pine branch”. Pravat’s repetition in the final two
lines enhances the concept of the tanka greatly, and only a skilled tanka poet could
create the feeling Pravat has given readers in this tanka. It's yet
another stunning example of his usual fine work!
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